Globalisation affects tourism in many aspects. In the economics, it speed up the growth of tourism industry and in social and culture it increase the improvement of the tourism services.
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There are also benefits and drawbacks of these effects. Tourism in globalisation world brings wealth to countries. However, there are local people who need to be considered.
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The development of tourism still keep going and the number of tourism growth is predicted to be higher. Many countries depend on their tourism as it brings money to a country but with the loss of their culture.
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As the globalisation make technology become better, the management of tourism should become better as well in order to minimise its negative effects as possible and benefit more for local people.
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